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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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0 posted 2006-12-06 11:37 PM




Of all my thoughts
Of all my words
You are in each of them
I don’t want them to stop just yet
I’m having too much fun with you
And besides I get to play God and
Keep the best of them to myself
I'll be sure and let you know
When I let you go...

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2006-12-06 11:43 PM


oh how I can relate to this!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2006-12-06 11:57 PM


thank you.... funny how thoughts can overtake your thinking sometimes!   RDB
trutodaraiders
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3 posted 2006-12-07 12:46 PM


wow this poem can go both ways. Hames or knowing games being played. Kudos

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2006-12-07 12:48 PM


thank you my sweet Bill! are you back from Oklahoma yet?  RDB
sewasham
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5 posted 2006-12-07 10:23 AM


Nicely done. Thanks for sharing. Take care and Have fun. Steve


HopeS
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6 posted 2006-12-07 12:00 PM


Having someone in my thoughts most of the time and expressed in words , I can relate

Hope

The Lady
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7 posted 2006-12-07 04:08 PM




"And besides I get to play God and
Keep the best of them to myself"

yes Roniece
the best part of all is
playing god and keeping the best

I love this...


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