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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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Pastures Into the sea of measureless Flies a kiss o’er the abyss To sail the future like a dove And billow the sails of my love It pales the dark of heavy clouds And lifts the weight of shriven shrouds It stows the blight of smoky gray And hoes the light of joy and gay Strata’s the mist of coming dawn Crystals the hews of early morn Twills the blue to gold of day And sweeps the cobwebs that may stay It guides you in the circles fare Back in my arms just waiting there And lures you like an angels harp With out a flat without a sharp To end you’re ever searching goal Into the pastures of my soul |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
"And lures you like an angels harp With out a flat without a sharp" beautiful |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
passing, Thank you sweety.  |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As usual, well done, Sy  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Interloper And once again, thank you. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I loved this poem; where do you want me to start? I like the imagination that you captured. Nice write Strata’s the mist of coming dawn Crystals the hews of early morn Twills the blue to gold of day And sweeps the cobwebs that may stay Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
trutodaraiders Appreciate your read and comment, thank you. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"Twills the blue to gold of day And sweeps the cobwebs that may stay" oh what a beautiful morning Sir Sy I've got a beautiful feeling... |
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stevepoet Junior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 46 |
Nice.Good rhyming, good meaning to the poem and good flow.Enjoyed it! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady, "I've got a beautiful feeling" Everythings going my way. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
stevepoet Thank you and glad you enjoyed. |
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Susan Caldwell Member Rara Avis
since 2002-12-27
Posts 8348Florida |
sounds like a peaceful, secure pasture to be in.. "too bad ignorance isn't painful" |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Susan, Thank you and yes it does. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy, I like!! RDB thank you x |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Roniece, You are a doll, thank you. |
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