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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2006-12-05 09:13 PM


creeping from the darkness
into the light
forgetting what is wrong
and what is right
understanding nothing
right from the start
knowing that somehow
he's planned every part
stage's been set
roles been given
around her eyes
she wears a pink ribbon
what was cloudy
soon becomes clear
becoming the wall
and letting go of fear

kingsangel

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-05 11:00 PM


Julie you have a way with words - all very nice words too
RDB

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2 posted 2006-12-05 11:39 PM




"what was cloudy
soon becomes clear
becoming the wall
and letting go of fear"

excellent Julie


Angel4aKing
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3 posted 2006-12-06 01:22 AM


RDB...Thank you this is one of my favorites that I have written lately....


Lady...thanks for stopping to read...


kingsangel

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4 posted 2006-12-06 10:14 AM


fear shan't tarry here
for no respite shall it find
love is shining bright

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Angel4aKing
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5 posted 2006-12-06 12:55 PM


Love and Fear do not go hand in hand that is the truth, the question is how do we exscape fear to find Love?

kingsangel

trutodaraiders
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6 posted 2006-12-06 02:56 PM


Your words so true. Nice write.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



Angel4aKing
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7 posted 2006-12-06 03:12 PM


Thank you...and how's about those raiders huh?

kingsangel

MoonShadow
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8 posted 2006-12-06 03:23 PM


Nice Angel...

"Creeping from the darkness into the light,
Forgeting what is wrong and what is right."

  Such a fine line between right and wrong is often obscured in the eyes of the beholder.. according to the masses (society)

"Knowing that some how he's planned every part... Stage's been set roles been given.."

  Submissive acceptance with trust absolute.. is a choice and a plan as well.

Fear is escaped by letting it go and replacing it with respect, trust.. and then unconditional love, both given and accepted.

Sweet Dreams and safe journey in your search, Angel.

MoonShadow

Angel4aKing
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9 posted 2006-12-06 04:28 PM


I love what you said about replacing fear with trust and respect.....Trust is a huge thing for me....thank you for your insights and replies.

kingsangel

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10 posted 2007-01-15 02:50 PM


A most excellent write!  

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

Angel4aKing
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11 posted 2007-01-16 12:43 PM


Thank you..I was thinking about changing the namw to this one, however, it's too late. HMMM

~~~kingsangel~~~

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