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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2006-12-04 05:30 PM


I wonder
if you are not
the same as me
I wonder
do you also
bleed?
I wonder
if you wouldn't mind
looking at a reflection
of you through my eyes?
I wonder what my reflection
looks like through yours?
I wonder what is hiding
behind your locked doors
your judgement of me made me wonder
what perfection looks like.


kingsangel

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The Lady
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1 posted 2006-12-04 05:54 PM



“your judgement of me made me wonder
what perfection looks like”

ohhh
biting and so good Julie

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-12-04 06:37 PM


ms jul, enjoyed this, kewl stuff
LeeJ
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3 posted 2006-12-04 11:03 PM


bittersweet in such a beautiful way
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2006-12-05 03:16 AM


agreed - a very good write from you Julie

ah perfection!

Be well
Roniece

passing shadows
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5 posted 2006-12-05 07:25 AM


good thoughts and feelings here Julie
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6 posted 2006-12-05 09:37 AM


gr8 write

Angel4aKing
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7 posted 2006-12-05 11:46 AM


Thank you all for your gracious replies..

kingsangel

MoonShadow
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8 posted 2006-12-05 03:07 PM


Perfection... like beauty... is in the eyes of the beholder.

Wonderfully written and thought provoking, Milady.


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