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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest 
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And when the peddler cries strawberries That's when my heart replies, strawberries Love tastes like strawberries ~Solomon Sanders in the dead of winter he brought me strawberries deepest cold night he fed me red stained my lips with smiles in the dead of winter he brought me strawberries circled my wrist with slender silver words tousled my hair oh happy gifts but when he rose to leave he took something with him |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
I enjoyed this very much. You have an excellent way of saying much with few words... and with the words you choose a most interesting allegorical vision.. that is created one vision for some... but perhaps a different one for another (me included)... in any event your work is very enchanting and I look forward to reading more (and perhaps searching for that special vision). |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, berry nice, he was wise to take something with him, so you always wanted him back to give him more, enjoyed it ms |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
MoonShadow enchanting is such a nice word thank you so much Stranger darlin’ there are just some men you always want back... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Would you have had it any other way? I love the way you weave your words... Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Interloper I would have had it no other way.... thank you Doctor Love |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
well i hope he took it for safe keeping...and returns it unscathed....i like this one... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
good point Angel I hope so too... thank you |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Enjoyed this so much Kate, and have to tell you that title caught my eye right away, I'm baking Strawberry bread as we speak. Will save you some ok hon? Hugs you!! seek the flame within yourself |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
gentle Donna in the dead of winter you have fresh strawberries too? yes please I would love a piece of strawberry bread hugs to you! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
this is delighfully strawberry!  loved your writeBe well Roniece |
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stevepoet Junior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 46 |
I enjoyed this.short but sweet. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice writing...James |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
What he took your strawberrys?? j/k This was a nice write. Thank you for sharing your heart with us! Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
thank you Roniece steve, thank you thank you James Bill, I ate the strawberries every last one sent him out for morethank you... |
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