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Desert Dance
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Desert Dance |
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mister61 Junior Member
since 1999-08-12
Posts 41bergen county, nj |
Hide and seek, Take a peek And watch her steal away When I took Another look You shone your face my way A furtive glance A silent dance, Beneath the desert moon That first hello, I didn’t know We’d say good-bye too soon And since that night Of desert light That took me by surprise, I long to be Where I can see The moon glow in your eyes But if by chance Our little dance Was only for a song, You ought to know That soft, sweet glow Is one I’ll take along And think of when I met you, then Beneath the desert moon A lovely sight Bathed in a light That faded all too soon [This message has been edited by mister61 (12-06-2006 11:37 AM).] |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Excellent imagery... but I loved the rhyme and meter as well. I am partial to 'classical' structure and very impressed. Most enjoyable read. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Mister nice write. I did a good job capturing a faded love. Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Nightshade 
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Very nicely done. Much enjoyed. hugs, Chris Perhaps the best Yuletide decoration is being wreathed in smiles ~ |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
*lol* opps I mean you did a nice job. hehe sorry Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Harris~ My goodness ... I love it when the winds from an ancient time brings one back to this circle of rhyme~ This has a poignant beauty to it~ Good to see you~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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