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MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2006-12-04 01:20 PM

                   "Gentle Spirit"

            Gentle Spirit,
                heart of my heart,
                    illusive though it seems;

            Linger Angel,
                now from the start,
                    come softly to my dreams.

            Embrace warmly,
                hold so tender,
                    forever do I pray.

            Lovely sweet one,
                heart surrender,
                    I beg of you please stay.

            Loved Beloved,
                join together,
                    souls that rise and soar.

            Cherished Soulmate,
                in full measure,
                    entwined forever more.

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

1 posted 2006-12-04 02:11 PM

Nice touch on this poem. I think we share similar penminship. Kudos

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

2 posted 2006-12-04 03:17 PM

Hi, this is pretty. I guess thats maybe not the right word, but I'm in a strange mood. Thanks for reading about my Mom.
Sandra

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

3 posted 2006-12-04 04:04 PM

Kenneth~
You've been a long time gone ...
good to have you back~

The years have been good to your inking~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2006-12-04 04:26 PM

delicate
and lovely

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

5 posted 2006-12-04 04:41 PM

Tru .. Thank you for reading.

Sandra.. Thank you ever so much, Milady. It was an honor to read you as well.

Marge.. (Big Hug) It is good to be back.. kinda like coming home. Yes it has been a long time. I thought I would have been totally forgotten. (Big Hug)

Lady.. I do enjoy your work and look forward to reading more. Thank you for giving me a read.

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2006-12-04 07:21 PM

Oh this is such lovely writing and of course that title made me smile. Very nicely penned, sir.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love. Axel Ekenstierna

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

7 posted 2006-12-04 08:01 PM

GS, I am glad you like it, Milady. Thank you for your kind response.

Enchantress
Member Empyrean

since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

8 posted 2006-12-04 08:22 PM

Ken!! Welcome Home!!

You have been SO missed!!!
It's wonderful to read you again!
~Smiles Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

9 posted 2006-12-04 08:52 PM

Nancy... Thank you for dropping in to give me a welcome home read. Glad you liked it. (Hugs)

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

10 posted 2006-12-04 08:53 PM

Nancy... Thank you for dropping in to give me a welcome home read. Glad you liked it. (Hugs)

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

11 posted 2006-12-04 11:01 PM

this was beautiful....touches the soul of such a cherished one...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

12 posted 2006-12-05 12:05 PM

A gentle penning from your loving spirit! Truly enjoyed!

Giving you a big, warm, welcome-back hug!

EA

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

13 posted 2006-12-06 04:52 PM

Nice...James

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

14 posted 2006-12-06 09:56 PM

what a lovely read!

RDB

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

15 posted 2006-12-06 11:47 PM

beautiful piece

Beatrice Boyle
Member

since 2006-12-06

Posts 438

16 posted 2006-12-07 02:10 AM

This is absolutely lovely Moon Shadow.
Almost lyrical. Good job.

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

17 posted 2006-12-07 03:35 AM

may I use this in prayer to find my soul mate monsignor? Beautiful.....

kingsangel

Goldenrose
Member Elite

since 2003-05-30

Posts 3665

18 posted 2006-12-07 05:55 AM

Well written and rymed too, but the subject is always the best section of the poem and here it is love that rises above all, enjoyed..thank you..

Goldenrose

At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348.

MoonShadow
Senior Member

since 2001-08-02

Posts 943
Dark side of the Moon.

19 posted 2006-12-07 10:39 AM

Thank you James and RDB.

Passing Shadows.. Thank you for passing by and reading.

Angel.. feel free to use and soothe your soul, anytime, Milady.

Goldenrose.. (lovely name) thank you for the read and comment.

Ms Beatrice.. glad you liked the music of the muse. I tend to try to weave the music and rhythm into the dream, with varying levels of success.

I appreciate the comments as they are ever encouraging... My soul basks in the radiant glow and is warmed as well.

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