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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2006-12-04 01:32 AM




You’re in my head again
Thoughts of you just won’t go away
How can I stop these lustful images
Of laying in your arms
And being kissed every inch by you
Maybe I keep them there to remind me
That for a little while I was loved by you
Maybe I won’t ever let them go…
  

[This message has been edited by Roniece Dawson-Bruce (12-04-2006 02:09 AM).]

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LeeJ
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since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296

1 posted 2006-12-04 06:03 AM


perhaps you won't, as it was sooooo good and real at the time...know this place...and have been complimented over and over again, by realizing this ability to be able to love like that was truly a gift of love.

great write

Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
2 posted 2006-12-04 07:31 AM


ms b, enjoyed this reflection, cool work
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
3 posted 2006-12-04 07:51 AM


ah yes...this I well know

fine write

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-12-04 03:42 PM




some loves
are simply never forgotten Roniece
and the feel is what lasts longest
this is lovely...


trutodaraiders
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5 posted 2006-12-04 03:44 PM


short and heartfelt
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2006-12-04 03:46 PM


Keep them in your memory chest!
Well done

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
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7 posted 2006-12-04 03:51 PM


Warm memories... like a good classic film... are worth rewinding from time to time and reliving the moment. Excellent descriptive write. Thanks for sharing.
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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USA
8 posted 2006-12-05 02:57 PM


I can relate...and the only fear is that the real thing will be better than the dream...

kingsangel

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