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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2006-12-03 02:12 PM


twisted
words
broken thoughts
you believing lies
all my memories were
turned inside out

in between the
you and the me
the truth speaks
of lies
that you believe


kingsangel

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-03 04:13 PM


Julie... this is a great write.. you have expressed your feelings well here...

Be well
Roniece

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2 posted 2006-12-03 05:47 PM


strong words in small packages...well said.
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-12-04 10:10 AM


Well done

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