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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-12-03 11:04 AM



Souls find rest where peace is found
within hallways of healing
hope abounds

Listen with your heart
and you might hear
the sounds of those
who have fallen
to their knees     in tears,

or the joy and happiness
shared by a friend
each one                 unique
brings a voice to the blend.

SHH.....Can you sense it.......

I can't be positive~
but I KNOW that it's true
there are angels    whispering softly
in corridors of blue.


{for Pips....with many thanks...}

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (12-03-2006 11:48 AM).]

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trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02
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1 posted 2006-12-03 11:18 AM


I really really liked this poem. In a sense in my opinion it is similar to my angel poem that I recently posted.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



Gentle Spirit
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Posts 13989

2 posted 2006-12-03 11:47 AM


Thanks Bill. Yep, sometimes we are fortunate to have those who help lift us and even at times carry us on their very own wings when we are to weak to fly ourselves...

Many of our fellow pipsters do that
and I just wanted to say thanks again to all those wonderful people who have allowed me to fly among them...


The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
3 posted 2006-12-03 10:56 PM



It is a sweet thing, friendship, a dear balm, A happy and auspicious bird of calm...              
  ~Shelly

count me as friend
gentle Donna...




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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
4 posted 2006-12-04 10:17 AM


Just a gr8 write

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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