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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-12-03 09:44 AM




so little time to spend they say
one should be selective
how their moments will be filled

for the sake of one's health
I gave up the cigarettes
and I quit sipping the wine

the fast cars too were stored
somewhere to gather eyes
but not my handprint occasions

now the cigars heal my moments
and three finger often's of jack dan
along with the two wheel demons

that offer no salvation
and beg for no forgiveness
only edges with second hand views

as they flash before my eyes again
____________

daark



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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2006-12-03 10:00 AM


Dark Stranger,
C'est la vive. Enjoyed the read.

Martie
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2 posted 2006-12-03 10:55 AM


DS....I can picture the change...it looks pretty good!  
Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2006-12-03 11:06 AM


You are in prime form this morning D,
and looking pretty darn good in it, too.

niiicee Dark buddie

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

trutodaraiders
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4 posted 2006-12-03 11:28 AM


I like. Im always giving up things for another that might be just as bad. I can relate to this poem

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



LeeJ
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5 posted 2006-12-03 12:17 PM


from the heart to the pen, stems all emotions...this was bittersweet, hopefully, the lessons learned from each other will be great rewards...

marvelous images

Angel4aKing
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6 posted 2006-12-03 01:42 PM


thought provoking....anything like heresay? heresee?  

kingsangel

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 2006-12-03 03:56 PM


your words melt me Mr Dark! a very nice read here...

Be well
Roniece

The Lady
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8 posted 2006-12-04 12:03 PM


nope
don't give up the handprint occasions
Stranger darlin'

I like this a lot...

Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-12-04 07:19 AM


pipamogios and amiga's, thanks to each of you for the blessing of your eyes and replies
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10 posted 2006-12-04 08:40 AM



Selective jack dans
and fingerprinted dark moments
of reading...

these make the memorable
sighs...

Dark Stranger
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11 posted 2006-12-04 09:06 AM


whitelady, thanks
Klassy Lassy
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12 posted 2006-12-05 04:31 AM


handprint occasioned by second hand views, and mirrored glasses...hmmmmmm!  
Only as daark does it...

Dark Stranger
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13 posted 2006-12-05 07:05 AM


ms kl, thanks to you klassyone
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