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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
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Sydney, Australia

0 posted 2006-12-03 04:40 AM



And so my thoughts of you are this
I would like another moment with you soon
You make me smile
You make me laugh
You make me feel like I’m loved awhile
Life is short
Opportunities are limited
This I know
But
What you give me
Is precious like a winter’s rose
I will cherish it forever
And
When the time comes to say goodbye
I will smile graciously and wish you well

Hmmm....I'm rambling here I know!!       

© Copyright 2006 Roniece Dawson-Bruce - All Rights Reserved
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
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West Coast
1 posted 2006-12-03 07:24 AM


ms b...he is waiting too, hurry before yesterday is gone.  enjoyed this one
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2006-12-03 02:02 PM


Unfortunately, love does not come with a guarantee but it certainly can be worth the gamble of one's heart.

This saying may be trite, but it is so often true, "It is better to have loved and lost than to have never loved at all!"

Lovin' hug,
EA

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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USA
3 posted 2006-12-03 02:04 PM


must be someone special...

kingsangel

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-12-03 11:20 PM




“You make me laugh”

ah Roniece  
laughter is so deadly wonderful  
can cause a woman to fall in love
yep
head over heels    
sigh…


passing shadows
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displaced
5 posted 2006-12-03 11:45 PM


been there...still am there sometimes I think

good write, I can relate!

stevepoet
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since 2006-12-02
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6 posted 2006-12-03 11:47 PM


I liked this.Nice flow to the whole poem.
Steve

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