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Open Poetry #39

Breathing Nil

themute
Member

since 2006-05-08

Posts 469
Maryland

0 posted 2006-12-03 02:00 AM

Lent by you, my dove of sighing-calls,
This autumns-kiss-respite that quivers so;
Embraced and given forceful-handed;
As the murmured whispers of the wind
Gave sways to tree-branch fingers growing seedlings.

I remember grievance in your postulate:
Did not the earth with aught create the privileged sky?

I am the two-toed wanderer

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-12-03 02:02 AM

Matthew... this I like! You have such passion in your words... enjoyed!

Be well
Roniece

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

2 posted 2006-12-03 02:22 AM

Nice word usage. This is a nice poem

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