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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia 
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You’re in my thoughts again Sitting there begging me to respond Knowing that I gladly will Hoping that your words Will keep me longer than you want Before you toss them to the wind And let the process again begin I'm not sure this really works but the thoughts that came out of my head said it this way...  RDB |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
like the way the thoughts came out of your head Roniece it works beautifully |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you!! your comments are well favored and cherished oh Lady one! Be well Roniece |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
I agree with lady; it's not the best that I have read from you so far, bit I can reasure you I hear you loud and clear on this poem. It almost seems like you are reading my brain Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
thank you Bill... (Hmmm... Bill is your name right?) appreciate your comments and for taking the time to read my work... Be well Roniece |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Yes it is. Sorry I am a California-Oakland Raiders Football fan hence my screen name, but yes indeed Bill it is. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
aaahhh.... well then, perhaps I need to change my name to 'All Blacks thru & thru" I'm a New Zealand Rugby Union All Black supporter from waayyy back RDB |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
Ah, this is a keeper |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Very nicely done Roniece! Love the pic..it's good to see you! Sing in me muse... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love the way it came out! well done! |
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twinkyfl1 Member
since 2006-12-15
Posts 133florida |
It works for me. Very nicely as a matter of fact. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah June... thank you ! you are so sweet RDB |
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