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Chase for Satisfaction
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Chase for Satisfaction |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Your diminutive, simplistic mind can’t seem to realize that you’re being tantalized with your own satisfaction, You take action, I play my reaction By passing along a box, That instead contains dissatisfaction, You slam your fist down saying, “I’m tired of your antics!” Running around in a frantic I start to panic, Sailing across the Atlantic searching for a place to hide, When I arrived, a train passed by and I grab the ride. You remember when I said “One day you’ll catch me Clyde,” Yeah, well sorry friend, I sort of kind of lied. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
HAHA I liked the ending. Thank you for showing your anger/flustration. I enjoyed reading it. Poetry is just the evidence of life. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
I like your words!  Be well Roniece |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
 OMG!!! This is so perfect for someone I know!!This is great! I love it! |
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Mr. Omniscient Member
since 2006-10-28
Posts 134 |
Thank you. |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
ohhhhhhhhhh i really loved the ending too... it was funny... hope to read more soon... hunnie  Better a witty fool than a foolish wit. |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
LOL  this is really good!!! |
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