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trutodaraiders
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since 2006-12-02

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0 posted 2006-12-02 08:56 PM

A single tear fell upon your cheek,
Removed by stroke of tender touch, sublime,
And touched by love within each other, seek,
To forgive and love until the end of time.

A single kiss upon your eyelid, closed,
Pain unbound - our souls became as one,
Eternal are we... who seek the endless road,
Another day, another dawn... another sun.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-12-02 09:04 PM

Welcome! This is a good write - very much enjoyed.

Be well
Roniece

trutodaraiders
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2 posted 2006-12-02 09:12 PM

Thank you for the warm welcome.!

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

3 posted 2006-12-02 09:41 PM

this is just beautiful

very touching

trutodaraiders
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4 posted 2006-12-02 09:43 PM

Thank you passing shadows. Your comment is well appreciated

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

5 posted 2006-12-03 11:07 AM

Welcome to Passions Tru.
Have read all of your posts, and applaud your creativity. Imparted to me a soul being set free, after a long period of captivity or restraint.
Never force your rhyme, for your talent will convey the emotions in your heart, without any prodding. You have a wonderful talent.
Liked this one the very best.
Nice flow here.
TD

TD

trutodaraiders
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6 posted 2006-12-03 11:15 AM

Thank you Diamond. I have been writing for over 10 years without guideliness. What I mean is that I was clueless, about the many styles of poetry, forceing flow, grammer. Surely my pen is being crafted into a new sense of inspiration. I have a lot to learn, and I thank you for your comment. Anything you would have different on some of my other poems?

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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Realms of Light

7 posted 2006-12-03 02:04 PM

So 'sighingly' romantic! Lovely write!

Loving Light,
EA

trutodaraiders
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8 posted 2006-12-03 02:13 PM

Thank you earthangel!

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Paul Wilson

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since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

9 posted 2006-12-03 02:22 PM

trutodaraiders...Tenderly written. Enjoyed and welcome...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Enchantress
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Canada eh.

10 posted 2006-12-03 02:36 PM

This is absolutely lovely!

Welcome to Passions.
You show promising talent.

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

trutodaraiders
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11 posted 2006-12-03 04:00 PM

Thank you for the warm welcome and comments to all

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

MsSouthernOrchid
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since 2003-07-12

Posts 192

12 posted 2006-12-04 12:06 PM

Truly lovely.

trutodaraiders
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13 posted 2006-12-04 12:07 PM

Thank You MsSouthern

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