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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2006-12-02 08:52 AM



Copyrighting


It's only there,  
where I copy write your voice
to place it safely in mind,
words on replay,
the air a gentle breezing of feelings
to sustain.

Fearing the corners of my mind
when time fills the emptiness
with wonder-thoughts
missing the missing,
as imagination grows
into storm proportions.

Until then, I remain
holding on...to common ground,
embracing memories
when love
was only...
a touch away.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2006 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394
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1 posted 2006-12-02 09:15 AM


very fine and pleasant 'write'!

Especially excellent:

"Until then, I remain
holding on...to common ground,
embracing memories
when love
was only...
a touch away."

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-12-02 09:41 AM


Thank you it is always nice to hear from another Pennsylvanian...

M

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989

3 posted 2006-12-02 02:16 PM


Hey M, I really enjoyed the play on words here, and loved the thoughts that went into it.  It is a cold day here in PA yes....and burrrr and even more cold on the way.  Stay warm sweetie, good to see your smile here.
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