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stevepoet
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since 2006-12-02
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0 posted 2006-12-02 03:22 AM



looking at cars,
afar is mars
on par with diamonds are these
emerald stars.
memorable scars
through this life of mine
press rewind and intertwined is the shine.
buildings tower with power at this late hour
the streets filling with students milling,
the air is chilling this November day
chimes of laughter and fun filter through the city
covered by sirens like a blanket,smothered by violence
but recovering is the city's way, even through the desperate acts of tyrants.
New York in the dark, sparked at its heart by the night
moonlight shines bright playing like a harp through the strife

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-02 03:28 AM


this is an interesting read of your city of lights enjoyed!

Be well
Roniece

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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2 posted 2006-12-02 03:39 AM


I forgot to welcome you to Passions!! You will love it here

Be well
Roniece

stevepoet
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3 posted 2006-12-02 05:23 AM


thank you for the comment
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2006-12-02 08:33 AM


Welcome to Passions!
Good to read you and I am sure you will enjoy it here.
~Hugs & Smiles, Nancy~

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2006-12-02 02:13 PM


Welcome to Passions. Enjoyed this slice of NYC night life.  I hope you enjoy your time here in these pages of blue.
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just out of reach
6 posted 2006-12-02 03:57 PM



Angel4aKing
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7 posted 2006-12-03 02:30 PM


I like this...welcome to the forums

kingsangel

JamesMichael
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8 posted 2006-12-05 07:25 PM


Enjoyed...James
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