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Ericc
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0 posted 2006-12-01 08:24 PM



In moonlight...you lay as
darkened water.

Parting clouds to hidden depths
revealed.

This moment pressed
against your
shore.




© Copyright 2006 Eric P McCarty - All Rights Reserved
ThisDiamond
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1 posted 2006-12-01 08:34 PM


WOW!!
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
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2 posted 2006-12-01 10:22 PM


so wonderful to read you again!
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2006-12-02 02:14 AM


how lovely is this!  

Be well
Roniece

Honeybunch
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4 posted 2006-12-02 03:01 AM


Okay - here's another "WOW".  
Margherita
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5 posted 2006-12-02 07:10 PM


I have been here, I let your beautiful words touch my heart and now I enter the night in silence ... carrying your vision within.

I love you.
Margherita

ThisDiamond
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6 posted 2006-12-02 07:19 PM


Eric,

This is perhaps one of the finest writes I have had the pleasure of reading.  The emotions this stirs are amazing.

Had to come back for seconds!
TD

LeeJ
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7 posted 2006-12-03 12:21 PM


Hello Eric
Its so good reading you again, however, I must also say, it is always a joy to experience your heart.

catalinamoon
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The Shores of Alone
8 posted 2006-12-03 12:22 PM


Very beautiful Eric
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