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TinaTrivett
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0 posted 2006-12-01 01:52 PM



In utero, only ten weeks along
Two boys fought bravely to live
Not surprised by the pair, as I had twins already
Mother is a twin, Father is a twin, numerous sets of cousin twins
Never could I have imagined that I would lose your brother
My twinless twin, your brother is with you
He will be with you all of your life
Your reflection in the mirror will be his way of assuring you he has not gone
Smile for him sweet boy...and let him know his mother loves him

© Copyright 2006 Tina Trivett - All Rights Reserved
Angel4aKing
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1 posted 2006-12-01 01:54 PM


this almost made me cry,,,I have chills as I type.....I know a few twins....enjoy the son you have and take care...

kingsangel

tek
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2 posted 2006-12-01 02:30 PM


very sad, but wonderfully said here.
The Lady
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3 posted 2006-12-01 03:15 PM



heartbreaking
and beautiful...


Edward Grim
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4 posted 2006-12-01 03:17 PM


Nice, I liked the mirror comment. Best regards...
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5 posted 2006-12-01 03:42 PM


Tina~
Twining is a forever bond ... you've penned it poignantly~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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TinaTrivett
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6 posted 2006-12-01 05:35 PM


Thanks so much all. 16 years ago I lost my son...and just now can write about it. So very painful.

There is no decent place to stand in a massacre...but if a woman takes your hand, then go and stand with her.

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