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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-12-01 11:48 AM



Morning
A time of peace
Softly the new day dawns
Darkness gives way to golden rays
Luna slips away quietly to rest
As sunbeams shine o're horizon
Whispers farewell to night
Birthing today
Morning.




I have felt the healing in the fingertips, burning up with fire;I have held the hand of the devil, it was warm in the night, it was cold as stone-I still haven't found what I'm looking for.....U2

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The Lady
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1 posted 2006-12-01 02:47 PM




love it
especially this line
gentle Donna

"Birthing today"

and birthing us anew...

Edward Grim
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2 posted 2006-12-01 02:53 PM


Very Nice...
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2006-12-02 05:36 AM


how do you do this?? these words are beautifully penned - I love your work!

Be well
Roniece

nakdthoughts
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4 posted 2006-12-02 08:04 AM


a nice December  beginning

M

stevepoet
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5 posted 2006-12-02 08:24 AM


beautiful.good rhythm to the whole thing.Please give me feedback on mine,its down the page.Thanks.
Steve

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6 posted 2006-12-02 08:30 AM


Beautiful Donna!
And...good morning to you too.
Hugs~Nancy

~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2006-12-02 11:00 AM


simply superb!

I've never written in special 'poetic forms' such as this....I am always greatly impressed by 'writes' like this!

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8 posted 2006-12-02 12:14 PM


Oh, how lovely!!
Very nice Donna.
hugs, Chris

trutodaraiders
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9 posted 2006-12-03 12:19 PM


rictameters is something that I am learning to do. And other various style's of writing. 10 years of unknowning styles I surely appreciate this poem

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



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