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Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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0 posted 2006-11-30 02:43 PM


inspired by Interloper Thanx!

dream with me when I sleep
dream with me through the night
dream the darkness and help me
find the light.....

kingsangel

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tek
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since 2006-11-30
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Austin, USA
1 posted 2006-11-30 02:54 PM


short and sweet.  i notice there are many short ones on this site.  short ones are good ones.  i have some too.

on the contructive side, this would be a good intro to a longer write.

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Member Patricius
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just out of reach
2 posted 2006-11-30 02:54 PM


very nicely done!
enjoyed.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
3 posted 2006-11-30 02:57 PM


I love it
Glad to have been somewhat of a muse...

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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4 posted 2006-12-02 01:54 AM


simply beautiful

Be well
Roniece

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