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Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA

0 posted 2006-11-30 12:02 PM


what happened that summer?
to my sisters and I?
down at the bay
on that warm spring day?
i wonder if i'll
find out before i die
what happpened?
please tell me
watcha know; watcha know
I need you to tell me
what I need to know
so please if you can
won't you help me  
understand
won't you explain
now that I'm back from
never never land....

I am ready to hear
and he's seen enough tears.....



kingsangel

© Copyright 2006 Julie Ann Campbell - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2006-11-30 01:37 AM


I like the rhyme and the flow of this...
I'd also like to know what happened!

Be well
Roniece

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2006-11-30 07:25 AM


ms jul' news at 11?  enjoyed it
Angel4aKing
Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
3 posted 2006-11-30 01:44 PM


Thanks Bruce it goes way back trust me..if only i knew :confused:

Dark...anytime...thanks

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
4 posted 2006-11-30 04:15 PM




sounds as if
you really need to know Julie
I hope you find out

nice work


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