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Grateful Shadows |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Grateful Shadows  Do come, thus to link light to dark From trance arises this forgotten spark Of what once was, in romantic dream Of all that binds in woven seams Pluck up thy quill and tend once more To all blue shadows beyond yon door Through the mirrors, beyond the mist As sealed throughout with most ardent kiss Write then of times that seamed our souls When love was real and made one whole Wherein trees would hold the all of us In memory now we are but a trust Hold in the grail all that will live Hold in the shadows the gifts that give Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?Keeping in mind, I must stand close... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
don't you just know I needed this tonight  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, enjoyed this view of your horizon mind |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lovely, Karilea....hugs |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Magnificent... Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Sissie....Your dreams and your heart at times show up and sing of many lives ago...you were lovely then as well as now.  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
bittersweet yet, very masterful write... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Though I am basically a 'minimalistic constructionist' (and the style of this 'write' is so very different from my approach),....I am compelled to say that the following (to me) is a grand example of the pure distilled essence of 'romanticism' at its finest!: "Pluck up thy quill and tend once more To all blue shadows beyond yon door Through the mirrors, beyond the mist As sealed throughout with most ardent kiss Write then of times that seamed our souls When love was real and made one whole" not that is is 'important'....but, I would simply change the word 'one' to 'us' in the last line shown above. excellent 'write'! |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
this is beautiful...I love the photograph also.....take care |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ There is just enough soft light to see beyond the edge of the shadows~ Lovely~ *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How beautiful this is dear Karilea. A new favourite to go beside 'Raintree Me'. Love ya lady~ ~I've loved you forever, in lifetimes before~ |
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Paul Wilson
since 2002-07-07
Posts 4711United States |
Karilea...So very romantically written. As always beautiful words from your quill...Paul ~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~ Paul |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
you know Karilea... this reminds me strongly of a book I was reading only this morning fine writing my friend |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
Such an artful hand that writes, such a loving soul that feels, thank you for this delightful write K... Goldenrose. At the touch of love, everyone becomes poets. Plato 427 BC-348. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Well now ....  hugs, Chrislane |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
"Write then of times that seamed our souls" THAT is a great line. Hiya stranger. |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Beautiful. Just beautiful! |
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