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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2006-11-29 02:39 PM


kneeling at your altar
my halo in your hands
set aflame by your eyes
making rivers appear
from the sands


kingsangel

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Deep in the heart
1 posted 2006-11-29 02:44 PM



Margherita
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2 posted 2006-11-29 02:49 PM


Great imagery.

Love,
Margherita

Angel4aKing
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3 posted 2006-11-29 03:07 PM


Thank you both I intended this one to be longer when I started it but nothing more needed said here. Thanks a bunch.

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Angel4aKing
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4 posted 2006-11-29 03:07 PM


Thank you both I intended this one to be longer when I started it but nothing more needed said here. Thanks a bunch.

kingsangel

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5 posted 2006-11-29 04:19 PM


ms jul, I like this

ms jul, I like this

and my double vision is working again

working again

(grin)

Angel4aKing
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6 posted 2006-11-29 04:27 PM


LOL...My computer is F*%#king up again!! It seems to be possessed!! maybe it is my roomamte!! Help I need a rescue mission!! lol
I thought you might like those little astrix by the way... thank you


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7 posted 2006-11-30 05:50 AM


Why say with a lot what you can say with a little

I liked

So won't you sing me a rainbow Josie roll me a song
Just tonight make it right 'cause it's been wrong for oh so long

passing shadows
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8 posted 2006-11-30 07:38 AM


so much said with so few words! I love that!
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