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The Sea |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
The Sea ___ Walking along the beach I dreamed of time and space, while the waves played their melody and the sun warmed my face. On the fresh morning air came a warm salty breeze, wafting over the sand and curving through the trees. I just stood there for awhile looking far out to sea, my heart filled with awe at how lovely the sea can be. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yes, I live not far from mine...rarely go, but when I do, it's awesome! beautiful poem! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Very well done  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I often walk along the beach and feel an affinity with the sea Hope |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
this was dearly felt...never ever did I view a sea more beautiful then the azure shades of the carribean...and your poem reminded me of it, once again...thank you |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is beautiful and so serene. Very lovely  |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
Thank you all for the kind words. I have always loved the sea, as something about it just seems to renew the spirit. I am so glad you all enjoyed the poem. |
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