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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-11-28 06:23 PM



Something Like Fantastic


I don't know if
I can describe it.
I'm not sure if
I would want too.
All I know is
there's a feeling
that comes into the heart
when you start feeling that
someone special to you
cares for you.


JamesLee
12November
2006


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-11-28 06:25 PM


yes James, that is always such a fantastic feeling and you describe it so well.  Nicely done.
Margherita
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2 posted 2006-11-28 06:33 PM


Just so, it's a pure rush of KNOWING and ANTICIPATION.

Beautiful, dear James.

Love,
Margherita

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2006-11-28 08:43 PM


James this is an excellent write and very true!

Be well
Roniece

The Lady
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4 posted 2006-11-28 09:35 PM



sounds a lot like love to me
very nice
James


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5 posted 2006-11-28 09:46 PM


Yes, I know this feeling well!  


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6 posted 2006-11-28 09:53 PM


You describe that feeling very well.  Joyce
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7 posted 2006-11-29 07:39 AM


you got that right
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8 posted 2006-11-29 07:49 AM


nice write James
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Deep in the heart
9 posted 2006-11-29 09:19 AM


Almost cannot be put in words, but you did it!
Well done.

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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