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A Lock and a Key
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A Lock and a Key |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
A Key and a Lock quarreled: the Key proudly displayed its size and flexed the strategic variations which presented it unique - the Lock but frowned upon such a display, for, as any lock knows, the real meaningful workings are contained within - and each boasted about its own importance, independence, and individuality... and while they quarreled so, behind the locked door a bright Candle slowly burned down... CG [This message has been edited by CastleGuard (11-28-2006 07:44 PM).] |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Very lovely and profound too! Love, Margherita |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
ah yes CG point well taken |
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MsSouthernOrchid Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192 |
This is very good. |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
that's exactly what happens when one or the other feels more important M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
indeed and sad |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Interesting write  Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
what we are independently and within relationship to each other, well thought out, executed perfectly...in allowance (smiles) and sigh |
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CastleGuard Senior Member
since 2003-04-30
Posts 760Alberta, Canada |
Thank you for everyone for the comments. I too long to see the Light.... CG |
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