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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-11-28 01:45 PM



howard, you're being way too hard on yourself

                    you have a wealth

of good qualities

if only you could follow me

so we could live out our fairy tale

your intentions to swallow me

could have made my heart swell

did i mention your policy to see us shopping at Wal Mart could have possibly led to the wedding bells

                         you seek?



                                                         love,

                                                         eve



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1 posted 2006-11-28 04:37 PM


Well I am sure heading to Wal-Mart right now, and try my luck!

Enjoyed your poem.

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2006-11-29 05:25 PM


Enjoyed...James
Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
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3 posted 2006-11-29 05:32 PM


Take her SHOPPING already!!!

kingsangel

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