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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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gata say she knows the perry girl they do early tea time some newsdays rolling steel down the edge's sides making their intention's indention to mosey shoe down to the hollytown at the cathedral without a god where the metal women wear their armor as tan tin candy with the shimmerease they bend their iron for the eye guys that pretend they have lucky pockets with magic islands behind the lens waiting for lady messiahs to blind them it's more the dance than the music goddesses were at moments mortal then when the dice rolled politicians painted on dots of eights and elevens and a pair of edges were a pair of ones _______________ daark [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (11-28-2006 08:57 AM).] |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
It's more the dance than the music My favorite line in this one.....but what of the dance? kingsangel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms jul..thanks ms...as for the dance, it is the constant motion, remaining as part of the wind. |
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Decaflame Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635 |
But what if we were to study the music, for no other reason than to find the heartbeat? What then, of the dance? Would we stop, and count the beats until our feet couldn't do anything but clip along in frenzy? You always make one feel, DS. Thank heavens for that...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms D, so true, thank you for reading between the lineup |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' I have been to this very cathedral without a god lot of nice dancing going on there the priest is nice too he needs no music |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
where the metal women wear their armor as tan tin candy with the shimmerease I sure liked those lines, and shimmerease just has the coolest image in my mind. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, you are always welcome to spend your sin there, thanks hon ________________ ms myst..that glossy coating on vixen skin..seemed to fit that word..thanks so much for the eyes |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
music is not needed stranger, when one dances slow enough.....to hear their own music.... |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks lady friend...yes, some dances are just the music itself. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: how cute! that's what occurs! Love, Margherita  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar', thanks lady friend |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I really like that 'it's more the dance than the music' ---well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms nan, humble thanks lady friend |
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