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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2006-11-27 04:58 PM


doing the draw of queens
where ten of a kind is fine
but five is better in the long run

candy tan kind of dancer
in a baseball hat and a damn yeah
down by the front rows

swinging a bat at imagination
a lady should carry a weapon
when her back is turned that way

and a million eyes are counting
the suggestions of their minds
when an eight is so close to a ten

but one of a kind is the sinner's win


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daark

scribblenote:something about a bikini contest and trying to keep track of the points

[This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (11-27-2006 05:32 PM).]

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The Lady
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1 posted 2006-11-27 05:07 PM




Stranger darlin'
you've got enough fingers
to keep track

nice one

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2006-11-27 05:32 PM


ladyone, last count after ball four, but was fun to review the scores anyway., thanks ms
Angel4aKing
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3 posted 2006-11-27 05:55 PM


You never fail...another reflection of ME in the mirror...

kingsangel

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2006-11-27 06:01 PM


ms jul...and so many windows too, thanks
Gentle Spirit
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5 posted 2006-11-27 06:15 PM


a lady should carry a weapon
when her back is turned that way

reaching behind me to find it now...

now where did I put that....baseball bat..

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2006-11-28 09:25 AM


ms gs, ya gotta get close to use a bat yes?  thanks ms
Gentle Spirit
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7 posted 2006-11-28 01:56 PM


yep....real close....
inkedgoddess
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8 posted 2006-11-29 06:52 PM


id like to play
with your one eyed jack
how bout it?

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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9 posted 2006-11-30 01:33 AM


ooh now I do Bikinis... well!  loved this write of yours

Be well
Roniece

Dark Stranger
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10 posted 2006-11-30 07:06 AM


ms g, thanks babe


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ms inky, if you have a pair or better you can raise me anytime, thanks ms

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ms bruce, thank you for the comment, you smile me

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