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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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Finally the fall of rain creep creep the morning along the quickening slow go slow today from fasting holds a fortune call them little pieces of torment and change a rag to rage the indifferent dirt split and narrow crease of sorrow hanging tree so glory bound dry golden brown in stages curtained to the naked almost gone a cage fast from cloud escapes the hungry night and the brittle leaf the weeping keeps then falls all grace of mending water come save day |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This rain sings its song and you have recorded it ever so beautifully, dear Martie. This water's sacredness has been acknowledged by your fantastic pen. Love, Margherita |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
I love it  |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
oh Martie I crave rain so and your words sustain me for now beautiful thank you |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
You are a wonder of words sweet Martie! hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
oh man Martie...I will never figure out how you do this, but PLEASE keep on doing it. Your gift....your words...you. all so very beautiful little lady. HUGS |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Martie~'Tis you who writes the magic!!  |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
yes, dear lady, yes indeed, saves the day. Profound write, which leaves the reader to ponder his/her own reflection. But then, you always seem to initiate a great deal of insight and love. Hope all is well with you and yours. Hugs to ya Lee J. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
magic indeed |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
A bit here, a piece there, independent, almost unrelated parts of a single whole....and gradually the real of it becomes clear. I love it when poem does this, and you do it so very well. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Thank you so much....here I am waxing poetic over some silly drops of rain, when alot of you are probably sick of it...and ed...my mind works that way, if in the end it makes sense...yippee!! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Well, you didn't send me any rain, but you did send some fingering fog...  Thanks! |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Martie, I love this poem! The rain is just beginning here. "today from fasting holds a fortune call them little pieces of torment and change a rag to rage the indifferent dirt split and narrow crease of sorrow" |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Well.....I didn't exactly say it had to make sense to be beautiful....poem or mind! ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nice expression Martie I surely do love the end because it closes the reflection so well. Eric |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
You actually make rain desirable Martie, and I would trade you right now for all my snow. |
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Goodknight Member Elite
since 2002-06-15
Posts 2386Ohio, USA |
as wet as our fall has been there would be lots more poetry for you to write - loved this Marite - Paul |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh my !!! beautifully penned ... RDB |
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