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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2006-11-27 08:34 AM


Would You

Would you take my hand a day and stay?
Be a butterfly and fly away
Could you drop your binds of mind?
And dream with me a harbor find

Could you coup a carpets fly
Into the blue and endless sky
Into the wondrous sleeve of dream
Into the make believe of seem

For sure it takes a little wile
One with guile to set the style
Adornment of a common wish
With the implement of a swish

And there you are it’s all for you
Swish, you wished a dream come true
You gave yourself a day of play
And have the whole of night to stay

It is a gift from you to you
And has the essence of a coup


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Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-11-27 08:53 AM


Seymour, I would gladly take your hand and find a quiet harbor.
Or take a magic carpet ride with you too!
Have a wonderful day.
& , Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2006-11-27 08:56 AM


Nancy,
Wouldn't that be nice.

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3 posted 2006-11-27 09:44 AM


I can see all the gals' hearts aflutter with this one, friend Sy

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2006-11-27 09:52 AM


Interloper
LOL Thank you my friend.

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5 posted 2006-11-27 10:36 AM


Sounds inviting and oh so wonderful. A Lovely poem.
Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2006-11-27 10:41 AM


MsSouthernOrchid
Thank you so much.

Martie
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7 posted 2006-11-27 11:04 AM


Sy....me thinks I'll try that...sounds like a good way to spend time.
Margherita
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8 posted 2006-11-27 11:13 AM


You are the gift, dear Seymour!
"Would you" is so full of grace, your heart is the magical place ... the harbour.

Beautiful!

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2006-11-27 02:24 PM


Martie
You are more than welcome.

Margherita
Thank you and love and hugs back.

The Lady
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10 posted 2006-11-27 03:59 PM



Interloper's right
Sir Sy
my heart's aflutter
like the wings of a butterfly
take my hand
before I float away please...


Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2006-11-27 04:09 PM


Lady
Never fear I am here and I will catch you before you float away.


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