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Angel4aKing
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0 posted 2006-11-26 08:02 PM



It was dark in there
you couldn't turn on the light
the bulb was broke
shattered on the inside
trying to find our way through the dark
somehow illuminating before me

kingsangel

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1 posted 2006-11-26 10:52 PM


sometimes we can see things more clearly in the dark

nice write

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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2006-11-27 09:25 AM


This made me think.
I don't know if that is good or bad

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Angel4aKing
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3 posted 2006-11-27 11:25 AM


Thank you both for your replies....sweet dreams to all....

kingsangel

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