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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 2006-11-25 03:14 PM



Sublime
~*Marge Tindal*~

~Sublime
Inking word rhyme
Spilling thoughts across page
Never-ending swirl of worded twirl
Capture of indigo thoughts in quilling
Trailing heartprints left to follow
Leads one to the dreams edge
Sighs of rapture
Sublime~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -         noles1@totcon.com     

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Kethry
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1 posted 2006-11-25 03:29 PM


Marge,
this is wonderful, I was going to say glorious but that would be a tautology.

Cheers
Kethry

a good commitee can decimate communication.

sewasham
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2 posted 2006-11-25 03:34 PM


You write such beautiful words. It is always a joy to read your art. Take care and Have fun. Steve


Beasley
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3 posted 2006-11-25 03:52 PM


NEAT!
xox
Barb

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4 posted 2006-11-25 03:53 PM


Very beautiful my dear friend.
Have a relaxing weekend.
Hugs~Love, Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

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5 posted 2006-11-25 06:05 PM


Sublime indeed !
luv this!
hugs, Chrislane

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

Seymour Tabin
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6 posted 2006-11-25 08:04 PM


Marge,
A delight to read.

Pressie
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7 posted 2006-11-25 09:22 PM


And what wonderful twirl.

Well done Marge!

sandgrain
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8 posted 2006-11-25 11:43 PM


AH, such artistry in your poetry!

   Rae

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9 posted 2006-11-26 12:02 PM


You really have a way with words Marge. Loved it.
Betty
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10 posted 2006-11-26 09:11 AM


Love it
Martie
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11 posted 2006-11-26 09:42 AM


Marge/sis

and I wish to have dreams bliss
such as this


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12 posted 2006-11-26 10:49 AM


Capture of indigo thoughts in quilling

~*~

There's something magical
about the word indigo

and nice photo, Poet...




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13 posted 2006-11-26 12:07 PM



Siyo my beloved sister/friend your soft beauty never fails to take away my breath,such soft and loving messages to be found within our dreams. Vsigi nidvlenvda aya adanvdo!


  granny!

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14 posted 2006-11-27 08:57 AM


Words can create such wonderful whirlwinds. Great work as usual, Marge!

sky

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15 posted 2006-11-27 09:45 AM


Marge, are you penning subliminal thoughts here

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16 posted 2006-11-28 02:21 PM


delightful
dear Poetess

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17 posted 2006-11-28 02:48 PM


I love your unique way of winding your words around our minds and hearts.  Love, Joyce
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18 posted 2006-11-28 03:25 PM


"Trailing heartprints left to follow, leads one to the dream's edge."

Greatpersonification and use of imagery... truely poetic beauty. Thank you for the mental picture.

An Old Friend (MoonShadow)

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19 posted 2006-11-29 02:14 PM


Dear Marge, you love the words and the words love you, the result is awesome.

Loveya,
Margherita

Marge Tindal
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20 posted 2006-11-30 08:29 AM



~Dreaming
Gifted words twirl
Carrying me beyond
To mystical magic of friends
Leaving such soft and endearing replies
Captivating the heart of friend
Leaving me many sighs
Indeed, I'm caught
Dreaming~

~*~


Thank you all for coming in~
For leaving footprints for this friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~


~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email -           noles1@totcon.com     

Drauntz
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21 posted 2007-05-14 06:11 PM


beautiful and a beautiful "dream" too.

love them as I always. A soft wind flows in perfume for the soul.

lovely

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