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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2006-11-25 11:05 AM



        Dearest Dreams!

SHE!...is the dream-wind spirit
through meadows of my mind...
teasing the grandest sunset
just to vanish once again
as the lovely last departing
  smile
melts beyond the sunrise.        
Would that I may catch a cloud....
then I shall hold her heart
in forever “Deep-Time” dreams!



© Copyright 2006 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2006-11-25 11:20 AM


~Grin
What a lovely verse to read this morning!
Enjoyed this very much.

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2 posted 2006-11-25 11:37 AM


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3 posted 2006-11-25 02:47 PM


Bruce~
Such a romantic you are ... and that's a good, good trait to have~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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4 posted 2006-11-25 03:05 PM



I so much love this one Bruce.
~Soft smiles & warm hugs, Nancy~

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

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5 posted 2006-11-27 03:00 PM



Bruce
sigh...
you just keep doing it

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6 posted 2006-11-27 03:01 PM


Well writ

secondhanddreampoet
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7 posted 2006-11-27 04:17 PM


THANK YOU all!
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