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icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2006-11-24 11:45 PM


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river stones in time

each worn to conformity

once had character


©2006 by icebox

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© Copyright 2006 icebox - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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displaced
1 posted 2006-11-24 11:51 PM


sad but true
iliana
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since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434
USA
2 posted 2006-11-25 04:24 AM


Sunny, warm, flat stones
yield nothing to wading feet
looking for repose.

Was reminded of this when I read yours.  Guess I'm a nonconformist....*smiles*.  

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
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3 posted 2006-11-25 05:29 AM


I don't do these, but for YOU, I'll try:

  Two trees in the night,
they scratched fingernails in white--
  Africa's asleep.

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
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Between the Lines
4 posted 2006-11-25 06:54 AM


cornerstones of life

dug up in name of progress

the past tossed aside

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
5 posted 2006-11-25 07:50 AM


Lovely, short poem. The thought is magnificent. you should write for trams.

Kethry

a good commitee can decimate communication.

Martie
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6 posted 2006-11-25 09:49 AM


icebox....yet, would you blame the river?  
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