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Imagination Thieves
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Imagination Thieves |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma 
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 Imagination Thieves The yellow orb hangs In a forever frame Robbing the surreal Of its daily evening meal Beams of light reflect The brilliant rays That reach out to heal And hear nature praise Ghost and goblins Lurk in the tree tops Perched to spring When the twilight is king The shadowy figurines From ominous dreams Silently leap and tease Childhood fears with ease The crunching sound Of stepped on leaves Can be heard In the vision that believes The story is stolen By imagination thieves And is freshly sold Each time the eye perceives The canvas stain Shall always remain But the very next gaze Starts a brand new phase Omnia vincit amor |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
The story is stolen By imagination thieves And is freshly sold Each time the eye perceives The canvas stain Shall always remain But the very next gaze Starts a brand new phase Siyo Pressie so truly beautiful,of fall days in childhood playing in the fallen leaves beneath a warm late sun! Sigi!
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Terry this is lovely and oh that photo... that looks like a perfect place on a perfect day to take a long walk or ride and then to just sit and wait on a lovely sunset!! I enjoyed this, very much sir. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
W O N D E R F U L ! !  Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Thanks granny, Donna and Nancy! Thank you all for taking the time to comment on my poem. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
One might easily fall into the photoed scene as well as into the words... well done, Poet. |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Thanks Karilea, your words more than honor the write. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
a beautiful orb it is! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
how well you bring the picture alive with your words. Kethry a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Dixie and Kethry, Thank you for the more than kind reply! It's amazing what a person can see peering at a painting. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Pressie....I have walked into a painting before and made it more....each who steps within this way changes themselves and it this way. Thanks for this! |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Thank you Martie for commenting on this poem. Mater artium necessitas |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
Autumn is my favorite time of year...I like this one... |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Angel4aKing, Thanks for the reply on my poem! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
a beautiful orb and a lovely poem Pressie |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Thanks Kate for the warm words of encouragement! |
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luminosity Senior Member
since 2005-11-18
Posts 813 |
The story is stolen By imagination thieves And is freshly sold Each time the eye perceives what an incredible poem, would that I could view a scene as this and put it so beautifully on paper, its as if you captured it as each and every person sees it...wonderful |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Thank you luminosity for your more than kind remarks! I am very glad that you enjoyed the poem. |
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