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PEBBLES
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since 2006-10-30
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South Australia, Australia

0 posted 2006-11-24 05:27 AM



Baffling words tumble through my mind.
Reflections of darkness hover.
A disturbing peacefulness stands still time
and inside myself, I take cover.

What would it be like to stay here forever
to be lost in an endless maze
Not knowing, not seeing, not ever
screaming out my silent rage.


HelenIL.

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Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2006-11-24 06:46 AM


Hey Pebbles,
I like your rage. I reminds me vaguely of the Dylan Thomas. Welcome to poetry and all of its wonderful weaving of emotions into words.

regards
Kethry

a good commitee can decimate communication.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2006-11-24 07:30 AM


Helen, this is an enjoyable read and I do agree with Kethry
PEBBLES
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since 2006-10-30
Posts 69
South Australia, Australia
3 posted 2006-11-24 09:36 AM


Thank you Friends. Looking forward to a long and fruitful relationship. Helen
wredgranny
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since 2006-11-18
Posts 493
Ky. USA
4 posted 2006-11-24 03:26 PM


Baffling words tumble through my mind.
Reflections of darkness hover.
A disturbing peacefulness stands still time
and inside myself, I take cover.

What would it be like to stay here forever
to be lost in an endless maze
Not knowing, not seeing, not ever
screaming out my silent rage.


HelenIL

Siyo Helen the poem is beautiful,the hurt a painful thing to my spirit!


  granny!

PEBBLES
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since 2006-10-30
Posts 69
South Australia, Australia
5 posted 2006-11-25 07:25 AM


Thank you so much for your compassion. Your kind words are like a gentle balm on my soul. Very best wishes to three very fine writers. Helen.
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