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Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989


0 posted 2006-11-23 09:58 PM



There is a certain tugging
a pulling felt
an attraction towards
this unknown feeling
that constantly
keeps calling me.

I try to toss it aside
push it to the corners of my mind
but like the blood that courses
through these veins,

it continues to return
into the hollow of my chest
and I breath it in deeply;

it won't be ignored
and I don't understand it,
but I'm almost thankful
that it is there
because in it is found
laughter, along with tears

and every now and then
for a moment

a smile.


dum spiro, spero

[This message has been edited by Gentle Spirit (11-24-2006 01:38 PM).]

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Decaflame
Senior Member
since 2001-05-11
Posts 1635

1 posted 2006-11-23 10:09 PM



As it should be,
never to be ignored, little one.




MsSouthernOrchid
Member
since 2003-07-12
Posts 192

2 posted 2006-11-23 11:05 PM


Gentle,
   I really enjoyed this one. Very nice.

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2006-11-24 12:11 PM


makes me smile
Pressie
Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157
Oklahoma
4 posted 2006-11-24 01:15 PM


I almost missed this one.

Another that flows from deep waters...


wredgranny
Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493
Ky. USA
5 posted 2006-11-24 01:55 PM



Siyo Gentle Spirit sigi for the sharing.


  granny!

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