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Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

0 posted 2006-11-23 08:40 PM

Resting there amongst the memories,
          upon a wooden hearth,
above a once
        raging fire...
  as embers slowly washed into
morning’s rise.

Folded,
        with just the edge of penned
words visible,
       a mystery waiting
    to awaken...to be held
     within the heart
of one,
         given by
               one other.

He knew...
She’d ever lightly grasp this morsel
           within two manicured nails, touching it
to a flushed cheek...the slightest of
a smile
          giving away her glee..

She would...
Laugh heartily in nervous reaction, subsiding
     to the slightest of a giggle before...
           She turned away....walking slowly, ever
softly...toward dreams....as he....

Dipped again, once again, a pen...one
              showing great wear....into the well of
darkened conjure....
         knowing this moment
was slipping into the night...as
                 the hour was nigh...

Stirring the mind
              in penned thought...
in poetic song as he...

Sang ever softly, upon a moon rise,
        writing,
            romancing the night to day...

Would the slipper fit a
                    chosen foot
         balanced delicately
                    upon smooth flesh?
    He smiled....
As a heel smoothly slipped
        and once more...
                  dreams carried
them both away...

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2006-11-23 08:51 PM

how beautiful this is!! Loved your write!

Be well
Roniece

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2006-11-23 08:54 PM

A wonderful feeling, wearing
a repost...with pleasure...

and this one wears well.

Happy Thanksgiving, Magnus!

wredgranny
Member

since 2006-11-18

Posts 493
Ky. USA

3 posted 2006-11-23 08:59 PM

with just the edge of penned
words visible,
       a mystery waiting
    to awaken...to be held
     within the heart
of one,
         given by
               one other.

  Siyo Magnus shared moments of caring,of laughter,of trials give the best of writing to share with other hearts.It is these that give to the rest visions and dreams to follow! Sigi my friend!

granny!

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2006-11-24 12:45 PM

I sure don't know how I missed this the first time but I am so thankful you posted it again!

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

5 posted 2006-11-25 07:42 AM

I missed this the first time so i'm glad for the re-post. Thank you for offering dreams that have the power to carry away.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2006-11-25 10:34 AM

Barry-very....I think you do romance the night to day.

MsSouthernOrchid
Member

since 2003-07-12

Posts 192

7 posted 2006-11-25 11:01 AM

This is lovely. Glad I had the chance to read this one.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

8 posted 2006-11-25 02:52 PM

Magnus~
Such a beautiful Cinderella-of-a-write~

'Would the slipper fit a
                    chosen foot
         balanced delicately
                    upon smooth flesh?
    He smiled....
As a heel smoothly slipped
        and once more...
                  dreams carried
them both away...'

*sighs* emitted~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

9 posted 2006-11-25 09:23 PM

a sweet love story with a happy ending, the kind I like best! Enjoyed the romance...

misce

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