»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #39
»
No Dreamer's Land
| Open Poetry #39 |
|
No Dreamer's Land |
|
|
DreamerSpirit Member
since 2006-10-02
Posts 240Buenos Aires, Argentina |
As Always thanks to all those who read my poems. Here we go No Dreamer's Land This place is preety dark no one smile or is allowed to laugh if you dare to enter you are not coming back welcome girl to no dreamer's land this land this cursed land doesn't have dreams they are extinct you'd better leave before you are seen 'cause here dreamers are not allowed oh, girl please leave this land no dreamer's land don't you ever worry about me 'cause i've become one of them but now that i have met you here in no dreamer's land i have something they won't see your love, your eyes oh, girl please leave this place now just leave right now you won't regret it and i will miss you, my girl you better run and never come back to no dreamer's land some day i'll leave this place alive just wait for me until then i'll be here waiting for my time to come to escape so just wait for me 'cause when i leave i'll go and dream our future so goodbye, have a safe journey out of no dreamer's land |
||
| © Copyright 2006 Denis-DreamerSpirit - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Your poem painted a gray place, what I imagine to be an ice age of the soul. Very good job with this Denis. TD |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
