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vandana
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0 posted 2006-11-23 12:07 PM



Save the love,
Love seems so right,
Love takes time,
And also our heart,
Save(the night)
Love will surely gives time,
For us to think,
Save the morning,
To bright your day,
Save all your time,
Save the night
Make it yours,
Make it right,
Save it for love
Feel so right,
Don't look back,
At your life,
You have a lot going on,
Look ahead of you,
You have love your life,
Save (the night)
Save your love
Come and fill the love,
Save your love
Where your heartbeats for every first time?
Save (the night)
For your love.....



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journie
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1 posted 2006-11-23 12:33 PM


It shows that you write from you heart.  This was a very good write.

~Journie~

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2006-11-23 12:36 PM


Vandana, it is so good to see you gifting us with your love writes again!
passing shadows
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3 posted 2006-11-23 02:27 PM


very passionate!
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4 posted 2006-11-23 04:05 PM


Hi vandana! So good to read you again.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

Sunshine
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5 posted 2006-11-23 08:55 PM



Vandana, Welcome home...

and happy holidays to you
and yours!




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