I Could Not Read Their Mind

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Open Poetry #39

I Could Not Read Their Mind

HopeS
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2006-11-23 11:15 AM

I Could Not Read Their Mind

Puzzles I could usually solve
Yet this had me confused
Its been difficult to figure out
I have been given no clues

What have they hidden within
I could not read their mind
Here was an ongoing puzzle
With the clues hard to find

Evident there was much more
Concealed behind a mask
Searching for those answers
Its always a puzzling task

Have there been tell tale signs
Ones which I failed to see
I ponder what cannot be seen
Not what they seem to be

Hope © 2006
Link to the poem with music and graphic below
http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/102/poem_8377294.html

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-11-23 02:26 PM

woman's intuition

never doubt it

Midnitesun

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since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2006-11-23 02:37 PM

I stopped doing puzzles years ago
when I 'found' too many missing pieces
that made no sense at all.
Enjoyed the write!

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

3 posted 2006-11-23 04:07 PM

Well done Hope - most interesting write.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

4 posted 2006-11-25 07:47 AM

I love puzzles...except when a piece is missing. However you have painted a wonderful picture with your words.
Cheers
Kethry

a good commitee can decimate communication.

MsSouthernOrchid
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since 2003-07-12

Posts 192

5 posted 2006-11-25 10:56 AM

Good one.

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

6 posted 2006-11-26 08:09 PM

good reflections

Interloper

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since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

7 posted 2006-11-27 09:24 AM

There is what you know,
what you don't know
and
what you don't know you don't know.
When you understand and accept that fact, happiness comes much more readily

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

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