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howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
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0 posted 2006-11-22 08:01 PM



you may never get the chance to know  

               that your inner glow

travels faster than the speed of light

                    to my heart

Einstein never figured on your existence

                 and from the start

                  of my insistence

the nuclear power radiating from your charm

powered up all the equipment on my farm

my persistence

                is definitely justified



                                                         love,

                                                         howard



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themute
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since 2006-05-08
Posts 469
Maryland
1 posted 2006-11-22 08:43 PM


I love puns and this is a great one and a great metaphore. I definitely digg it.

I am the two-toed wanderer

howardtsu
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since 2006-01-29
Posts 678

2 posted 2006-11-25 01:11 PM


thanks  
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