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Gentle Spirit
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0 posted 2006-11-22 09:01 AM



You bring gift of visions
laying them at my feet
that I might walk upon
petals of roses
tossed on whispering winds

where thoughts softly embrace
the fullness of curve
that sits on lips
parted in smile

warming a soul
that is missing you.

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

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Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
1 posted 2006-11-22 09:07 AM


...wistful whispers ~ so softly spoken.

An exquisitely poetic expression! Beautifully written, Dear Donna.

Sending a warm hug of love,

Linda
P.S. Re your photo ~ A lovely pensive pose!

Dark Stranger
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West Coast
2 posted 2006-11-22 09:13 AM


ms gs, he is blessed to have your mind this way, enjoyed
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
3 posted 2006-11-22 09:14 AM


Very softly penned dear gentle one~
Much enjoyed your words this morn.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

Pressie
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4 posted 2006-11-22 09:21 AM


"where thoughts softly embrace
the fullness of curve
that sits on lips
parted in smile"

Oh..Donna that's a wonderful description of a smile.

Loved it!

Mens regnum bona possidet

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Gaia
5 posted 2006-11-22 10:06 AM


!sighin~ and FEELING this whisper,
  not just hearing desire, soft longing

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Deep in the heart
6 posted 2006-11-22 10:24 AM


Simply wonderful

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

Martie
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7 posted 2006-11-22 11:44 AM


Donna...I'm warmed by the love in this that makes you smile.  
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