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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2006-11-21 09:11 PM


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As if on its back
Looking up

A crescent moon


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VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
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1 posted 2006-11-21 10:18 PM


Superb!

The image is delightful.

I have to admit that when I see a crescent moon, I keep expecting to see the boy fishing from it as in the Dreamworks logo. Do you know of it?

However to think of the moon resting on its back and looking up at the stars...that's a delight!

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

Huan Yi
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2 posted 2006-11-21 10:24 PM


VAS,


Thank you.

I found this in my notebook
and still thought it might be interesting.

Yes, I know the logo
yet, having been acquainted long before
by the Japanese, seem unaffected by it.


Thanks again.

John


passing shadows
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displaced
3 posted 2006-11-22 12:34 PM


I'm in awe
Drauntz
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4 posted 2007-04-25 12:52 PM


At down or dusk? I would prefer down. Because in case I falled, I would  not want to fall off to December at night, it is tooo cold.
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