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journie
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since 2006-11-13
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Missouri

0 posted 2006-11-21 12:30 PM



Of all places and time you had to walk into mine.

Like a whirlwind you romanced your way into my life.

You swept me off my feet and made my life complete.

A knight in shining amour you rescued my soul.

Off  we road side by side into the morning sun.

What once was two hearts are now joined as one.

© Copyright 2006 journie - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2006-11-22 12:43 PM


I like this!
aziza
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since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995
Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
2 posted 2006-11-22 12:56 PM


I do too.
It is a nice happy ending poem.
I love happy endings!

Welcome.
aziza

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
3 posted 2006-11-22 06:13 AM


what a nice ending! I enjoyed your write

Be well
Roniece

The Lady
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since 2005-12-26
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The Southwest
4 posted 2006-11-22 02:39 PM




greatly enjoyed journie!


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