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gurkha, jack and hd
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gurkha, jack and hd |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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you were a gunfighter with your hands slapping backside leather fast on the drawing attention to the fit and shouldn't be that tight on anything so pretty you said I was dangerous in my jeans circumcising a gurkha with my teeth and cauterizing the wound in cognac before burning a year off my life in twenty minutes of sidewalk tokin’ we didn't ride old metal that eve you had a decoration you couldn't ruin but he is back under his hen weight now and you have your foot loose on again along with some wicked suggestions about how you are having those urges for something real fast that takes time something that makes you want to hurry done but enjoy the long time of getting there and then you go again if you arrive too soon and there is still road left in the headlights _______________ daark scribblenote: gurkha is a user friendly stogie, old metal is the black _itch and the rest is highway spit whispering |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
for something real fast that takes time something that makes you want to hurry done but enjoy the long time of getting there and then you go again if you arrive too soon ~*~ some favored stories were being told.. I can hear the sounds...  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thanks lady, darn them stories.. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Stranger darlin' you are dangerous in your jeans |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ladyone, I just don't know how to become a safe place with that one thanks hon |
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Angel4aKing Senior Member
since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372USA |
this brought me many visuals...thanx for not stopping kingsangel |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms julie, my pleasure to continue beyond enough..thanks |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
 I can see this one. It's intimate and a little wry, a little bit of hair-of-the-dog but I-don't-care. I like it.Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms nan, thanks for the glance dance...and the texas eye |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
DS And I thought gurka was a pickle...hmmm....seems you speak another tongue sometimes except I did understand about the jeans. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms martie..gurkha is a cigar brand (in this context anyway) the technique is snipping the end and dipping it in cognac for a bit of smooth flavor on the smoker's end before lighting it..the jeans ya already know about..wink, thanks little neighbor |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Have been waiting to reply to this one all day whilst grinnin about those jeans... images indeed, Stranger.  |
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MGROVES
since 2004-02-01
Posts 3802california |
great visuals here dark one My spirit will rise |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I kinda got lost in the image of the circumcision. I think I am sick -- Okay, on to the jeans ... I'll think about the jeans. aziza |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
hmmmm.....love the visual of the jeans!!! Be well Roniece |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms gs, thanks for waitin ms ________________ ms groves, thank you for the eyes ________________ ms az..yep, you need a DR, will be right over..thanks ________________ ms bruce, thank you for looking there and here |
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