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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2006-11-21 03:24 AM



Weep Not


When angels depart,
those that understand
weep not,
for they know that
even if
the angel
never returns,
the love will remain.


JamesLee
20November
2006



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1 posted 2006-11-21 09:35 AM


Well done

Enchantress
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2 posted 2006-11-21 09:36 AM


Beautiful James.

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~
                                    

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3 posted 2006-11-21 10:00 AM


dang

this is wonderful

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4 posted 2006-11-21 02:27 PM


JamesMichael~
I like the softness of this so much~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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JamesMichael
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5 posted 2006-11-21 04:31 PM


Thank you interloper, Enchantress, passing shadows and Marge for the wonderful responses...James
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6 posted 2006-11-21 05:57 PM


That's lovely.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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just out of reach
7 posted 2006-11-21 07:05 PM


Yes !! Lovely James. hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
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8 posted 2006-11-21 10:05 PM


When angels depart,
those that understand
weep not,
for they know that
even if
the angel
never returns,
the love will remain.

Sigi JamesMichael

For a mother who has lost a son at the age of twenty this says what is in my heart!


  granny!

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9 posted 2006-11-21 11:59 PM


beautiful james

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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10 posted 2006-11-22 06:11 AM


JamesMichael - this is a beautiful write - I don't believe though that angels leave us they surround us with beauty and love instead to get us through our toughest moments.

Be well
Roniece

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11 posted 2006-11-22 02:31 PM




you have such a light touch James
beautiful


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12 posted 2006-11-22 02:35 PM


Even if the angel never returns the love will remain.....this one made  me think....thank you...

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13 posted 2006-11-24 05:46 AM


Hope I can see things this way when someone I love depart...

FNG

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14 posted 2006-11-24 06:00 AM


Thanks for the reminder,lovely Helen
Kethry
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15 posted 2006-11-24 06:47 AM


Now that is simple yet profound. wonderful writing.

a good commitee can decimate communication.

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